HRRBode
10 months ago
Hey! I'm not sure how to reply on here - or if it's possible, but you're welcome to share your feedback and ideas.
Personally, I do feel that the first story is missing SOMETHING and am currently wondering if I want to split part of what I started as the second story and place it with the first.
I will say though that a lot of this is intended to explore psychological conditions and the impacts life can have - so the creativity will be grounded in reality but will not work like reality (i.e. healing between "scenes" is meant to indicate significant time, but that's not fully expressed yet).