In the kingdom of Montesis, a place where magic is forbidden, two travelers face an uncertain fate. A technician and repairman of 129 years loses his powers, becoming unable to protect himself or to t...
5THE BEGINNING OF IT ALL: My first adventure – CH5
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Miriam Smithh
1 month ago
Hi Milkxo9,
I’m a casual reader and I really love reading stories. Today, while I was reading, I came across one of your stories and I absolutely loved it. The way you write truly sets you apart from others. I especially liked how beautifully you described each scene it felt so real and vivid I was just wondering, how long have you been doing this amazing work?
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Elaris Skye
1 month ago
I’m genuinely touched. The story was quiet, honest, and full of soul.
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karencrab
2 months ago
Hi, I thoroughly enjoyed your story when I read it. I would love to offer some suggestions that could improve your narrative even further, if that is okay with you. Is it feasible for us to communicate via a different platform?
Email address: karencrabtree98@gmail.com
Discord: karencrabtree_
Marsha Wellson
3 months ago
Hey, I was extremely drawn to your stories. As an artist, I think your next story has a lot of promise for amazing imagery and artistic development. I would love to work with you and offer some ideas that might enhance the impact and realism of your story.
Discord: marshawellson115
Amelia432
3 months ago
Hey, your storytelling really caught my attention. I’m an artist, and I see a lot of potential in your upcoming story for stunning visuals and creative expansion. I’d love to collaborate with you and share some concepts that could make your story even more powerful and immersive.
here is my discord ava_9764