It's been three years since Sa'tiel last crossed the bridge to the Idegen Citadel. Three years since she was last subjected to the siren hymns of the black pit. Three years since she's felt Zæle's emb...
This was a joy to read! If you’d like, I can share some thoughts I had while going through it
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Elsa Lopez
2 weeks ago
I enjoyed this so much! I’d love to offer a few thoughts that might help elevate it even more
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Chandra Snicker
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3 years ago
*Because I cannot go in and delete/change my comment: Meant to put "Your" not "You're." :)
Chandra Snicker
critic
3 years ago
You're descriptions and knack for storytelling are astounding. Nice work, DoubleBlind! Good luck.
H.R. Parker
critic
3 years ago
Once again, another incredible story!! Despite the short word count, you immerse readers so deeply into a world that already feels very fleshed out, like we've already visited this place. The contrast of nature vs. tech was very unique. Loved this! Hated to see this one end, I could read an entire series based in this world. Bravo!