Ruby M. Ballamy
2 days ago
Hello William,
I truly enjoyed reading your story it was engaging and left a lasting impression on me. I would be delighted to share a few thoughtful suggestions that could help strengthen the narrative even further, if you’re open to receiving feedback.
Would you be comfortable connecting through another platform for easier communication? If so, you can reach me directly at rubymballamy@gmail.com
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Looking forward to your response,
Ruby M. Ballamy