Roxva is a Searcher and her mission is to find viable planets for her home, the Queen Ship, to consume. If unable to consume enough resources, the Queen Ship will die and bring the people aboard down ...
I truly enjoyed reading this! I’ve got a couple of suggestions in mind if you’re interested
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Elsa Lopez
2 weeks ago
I enjoyed this so much! I’d love to offer a few thoughts that might help elevate it even more
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H.R. Parker
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3 years ago
Oh, Hannah, what an exquisite story! The characters are soooo endearing. I especially loved the special connection between Sachi and Roxva. Your worldbuilding is simply amazing, and it was a world I didn't want to leave, much like Roxva, despite the frightening threats coming out of the mountains lol. I got a little teary-eyed at the end. Great job! Well done, Hannah, and I hope you keep publishing with us here on the site! :)