Suffering from an incurable disease, Zane discovers that he is growing more powerful overtime, which prompts the authorities to hunt him down. He has to let out all of his demons...both metaphorically...
Very interesting storyline and character. I hope to read more.
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Elizabeth Higgins
2 years ago
I agree. I'd love to see more. I could see you writing chapters for some of the other characters and their point of view and continue on the story.
H.R. Parker
critic
2 years ago
This is such an interesting concept! I could see you expanding this into something longer. The worldbuilding, premise, and characters have so much potential beyond this one story!