VIEWPOINT-BLOOM

VIEWPOINT-BLOOM

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Clover2218
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Clover2218

1books
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This is the story of Chitra. A girl born blind, living her life in a world of darkness. This is a story of her and Finitum. The unique full-dive VRMMORPG that brought a new beginning to her life, brou...

Chapters

11. Illustrations and other stuff
22. Chitra and Akanksha
33. The budding hope
44. Chitra and Vikash
55. A new beginning

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Ruby M. Ballamy
Ruby M. Ballamy
3 days ago
Hello, I truly enjoyed reading your story it was engaging and left a lasting impression on me. I would be delighted to share a few thoughtful suggestions that could help strengthen the narrative even further, if you’re open to receiving feedback. Would you be comfortable connecting through another platform for easier communication? If so, you can reach me directly at rubymballamy@gmail.com. Looking forward to your response, Ruby M. Ballamy
Alexandraa Barrera
Alexandraa Barrera
1 week ago
I truly enjoyed reading this! I’ve got a couple of suggestions in mind if you’re interested Discord: alexandraa_barrera3 Insta: alexandraa_barrera2
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karencrab
1 week ago
Hello, I read your story and I really liked it. If you don’t mind, I’d love to share some ideas that might make your story even better. Would it be possible for us to talk on another platform? Email: karencrabtree697@gmail.com Discord: karencrabtree.
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Elsa Lopez
2 weeks ago
I enjoyed this so much! I’d love to offer a few thoughts that might help elevate it even more Discord: elsa_lopez12 Email: elsalopez3935@gmail.com
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Elsa Lopez
2 weeks ago
This was such a page turner! I’ve got a few ideas I’d be happy to share if you’re open to feedback. Discord: elsa_lopez12 Email: elsalopez3935@gmail.com

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