Eclipse shadows

Hi there your story is really addictive, I couldn’t stop once I started. I thought of a little idea that could make it stand out even more, should I share it?

Hey, I was extremely drawn to your stories. As an artist, I think your next story has a lot of promise for amazing imagery and artistic development. I would love to work with you and offer some ideas that might enhance the impact and realism of your story. Discord: marshawellson115

Hi there, I thoroughly enjoyed reading your story. If it's okay with you, I'd like to provide some suggestions that could improve your story even further. Is there any way we could communicate on a different platform? karencrabtree697@gmail.com is her email. karencrabtree on Discord.