Light & Darkness: Book 1

Hello! I just finished reading your story and wow, it was really amazing. The world you built is so cinematic, I could practically see the visuals in my mind. I’m a professional artist/illustrator, and I take commissions on comics, webtoons, manga and manhwa. I’d love the chance to bring some of those scenes to life visually. If it’s something you’d like to explore, I’d be excited to discuss it with you. No pressure at all, but I just think it could be amazing. Feel free to add me on Discord ( eve_verse ) if you’d like to discuss more or take a look at my work. Regards, evelyn.

I must say, your stories were a delight to read. They resonated with me deeply. As an artist I also have some ideas that could complement your work. If you’d like, you can contact me Discord: dragonborn_4

Great that the 1st book in the series is free :) I enjoyed reading it, the story and characters are amazing! Definitely worth reading.

I'm thankful for the feedback and I acknowledge it fully. I just wanna say that English is not my first language and I can't afford professional editing. And I want to write in simple way because I want everyone to understand the text, not only people from English-speaking countries. I want everyone to enjoy my stories. But thank you for your opinion, I'll take it into account to improve in the future :)

I admire anyone actually finishing a book (I still haven't succeeded in doing that myself). That said, this story is in desperate need of being proof read by someone with good English skills. Just skimming through some chapters I found many mistakes, sometimes in every other sentence. Besides that, a lot of the writing is perhaps a bit too simplistic. Sorry for sounding harsh, but that is the reality. I'm trying to say this nicely, but belive me, other people will/can be a lot more ruthless.