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This was such a page turner and I’ve got a few ideas I’d be happy to share if you’re open to feedback Discord: alexandraa_barrera3 Instagram : alexandraa_barrera2

This is fantastic work and I’d be happy to share some ideas if you’re open to hearing them. Discord: elsa_lopez12 Email: elsalopez3935@gmail.com

What a great story! I was hooked from the beginning. You drop readers into an immersive, gritty, almost medieval sort of world--but the tech the Theurgists have is a brilliant contrast, and very unique. Well done, Dan!

Hi Daniel, Just finished reading through this entry and I like your style! Great way of integrating the inspiration image into your story line. I think the UFO, tyrannical looking castle with the searchlight, and the bridge made good choices ( I feel like those were your choices!). I think the AI were a twist and a good one at that, the situation definitely seemed hopeless in the earlier stages. Great work!

40 years is a long time to wait for the triumphant return of romulus and remus, i wonder what the interim holds for paul and his like. down with the theurgists!