Veiled Horizon

Veiled Horizon

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John Nastali
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John Nastali

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Humanity’s first interstellar flagship, the Veiled Horizon, leaves Earth on what should have been a routine mission. But a faint, impossible signal pulls Admiral Razgriz and his crew into the remains ...

Chapters

1Prologue-Veiled Horizon Maiden Voyage
2Chapter 1-The Derelict Echo
3Chapter 2-The Shattered Archive
4Chapter 3-The Seed and the Shadow
5Chapter 4-Roots and Repercussions

Comments

luna James
luna James
4 weeks ago
There is a professional and effortless rhythm in your writing style.
laurendoesitall
laurendoesitall
1 month ago
Hello! I just finished your story, and I loved every bit of it! Your writing is so engaging, and I couldn’t stop thinking about how awesome it would be as a com. I’m a professional commissioned artist, and I’d be honored to adapt your story into a comic format. no pressure, though! I just think it would be a perfect match. If you’re interested, you can reach me on Disc0rd (laurendoesitall). Let me know your thoughts! Warm regards, lauren
Charles James
Charles James
3 months ago
Hi, fellow author. I’ve been reading your story and I really admire the effort and consistency you’ve been putting into it, it really shows. I’m an author as well and recently published my book on Amazon. I enjoy connecting with other writers and exchanging ideas about writing, storytelling, and just ways we can get more eyes on our work. If you’re open to a quick author-to-author chat, I’d love that. You can reach me on Discord: charles_james11 / Telegram: @CharlesJames_1 or Email: cj653498@gmail.com
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Lunacarter
3 months ago
Hi! Just wanted to say, your storytelling really stands out. It’s so visual and expressive that it almost reads like a movie script. I’m a comic artist who adapts written stories into illustrated form, and yours instantly sparked a vision. If you’re ever curious about how it could look as a comic, I’d love to discuss it. We can chat more on Discord (lunapuresoul) or Instagram (lunaartsoul).
lizzie_jassy
lizzie_jassy
6 months ago
Hey! I’ve been reading your story and really enjoyed it the emotions and flow felt very natural. While reading, I kept picturing how some scenes would look as comic panels. I’m a commission-based comic/webtoon artist, and if you’re ever curious about a visual adaptation, I’d love to chat. 📩 Discord & Instagram: lizziedoesitall

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