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Hey dude, I just read your story and WOW, my brain legit went into full cinema mode while reading, like I could literally see the scenes playing out lol. I’m actually an artist, and I usually do commissions for Webtoons, Comics, Manga, Character Art and Cover Art. And honestly? Your story as a comic or webtoon would be NEXT LEVEL! I’d be super hyped to bring it to life visually (no pressure at all, just thought it would be super dope). If you’re even a little curious or wanna check out my art, hit me up on Discord ( eve_verse ). Can’t wait to hear what you think abt the idea! Regards, eve

This was a joy to read! If you’d like, I can share some thoughts I had while going through it Discord: alexandraa_barrera3 Insta: alexandraa_barrera2

I enjoyed this so much! I’d love to offer a few thoughts that might help elevate it even more Discord: elsa_lopez12 Email: elsalopez3935@gmail.com

This was amazing! Fantastic cyberpunk setting and great characterization. Jack's voice in particular was distinctive and made for a fun lead. Loved the colorful world.

The overall feel of this one was so cool. I loved the world Chris Mason created in this retelling.