MANDALA

MANDALA

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Edward Eidolon
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Edward Eidolon

1books
8followers

An odd team of assassins hunts their target across the urban sprawl of everyday America. But is this world real, or something more? Join an unlikely group of friends as they deal out death across rea...

Chapters

1Prologue
2The Office Job | Chapter 1: The Gun
3The Office Job | Chapter 2: The Diner
4The Office Job | Chapter 3: The Target
5The Office Job | Chapter 4: Death Threats

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Alexandraa Barrera
Alexandraa Barrera
1 week ago
I truly enjoyed reading this! I’ve got a couple of suggestions in mind if you’re interested Discord: alexandraa_barrera3 Insta: alexandraa_barrera2
Ruby M. Ballamy
Ruby M. Ballamy
1 week ago
Hello Edward, I truly enjoyed reading your story it was engaging and left a lasting impression on me. I would be delighted to share a few thoughtful suggestions that could help strengthen the narrative even further, if you’re open to receiving feedback. Would you be comfortable connecting through another platform for easier communication? If so, you can reach me directly at rubymballamy@gmail.com . Looking forward to your response, Ruby M. Ballamy
karencrab
karencrab
1 week ago
Hi, I thoroughly enjoyed your story when I read it. I would love to offer some suggestions that could improve your narrative even further, if that is okay with you. Is it feasible for us to communicate via a different platform? Email address: karencrabtree98@gmail.com. Discord: karencrabtree_
Mattie Gidley
Mattie Gidley
2 weeks ago
Hello, hope you are doing great. I read your story and I really liked it. I have a lot of ideas for your story cooked in my mind and I'd like to share them with you. If you're interested let me know here's my discord mattiegidle3.
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Elsa Lopez
2 weeks ago
This is fantastic work and I’d be happy to share some ideas if you’re open to hearing them. Discord: elsa_lopez12 Email: elsalopez3935@gmail.com

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