MANDALA

Incredible writing, cinematic, visceral, and hauntingly poetic. Every line bleeds tension and tragedy, like a slow-motion fall through fire and memory.

I truly enjoyed reading this! I’ve got a couple of suggestions in mind if you’re interested Discord: alexandraa_barrera3 Insta: alexandraa_barrera2

Hello Edward, I truly enjoyed reading your story it was engaging and left a lasting impression on me. I would be delighted to share a few thoughtful suggestions that could help strengthen the narrative even further, if you’re open to receiving feedback. Would you be comfortable connecting through another platform for easier communication? If so, you can reach me directly at rubymballamy@gmail.com . Looking forward to your response, Ruby M. Ballamy

Hi, I thoroughly enjoyed your story when I read it. I would love to offer some suggestions that could improve your narrative even further, if that is okay with you. Is it feasible for us to communicate via a different platform? Email address: karencrabtree98@gmail.com. Discord: karencrabtree_

Hello, hope you are doing great. I read your story and I really liked it. I have a lot of ideas for your story cooked in my mind and I'd like to share them with you. If you're interested let me know here's my discord mattiegidle3.