This was such a page turner and I’ve got a few ideas I’d be happy to share if you’re open to feedback
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Jennifer Rogers
3 years ago
Another great story , just as I suspected from this author! She never fails to deliver an exciting twist at the end of the tale!
H.R. Parker
critic
3 years ago
I loved this unique take on Snow White from the mirror's perspective! I also enjoyed your writing style--it was like an old fairy tale. Well done!
Jon Besanko
critic
3 years ago
This was a fantastic story, Madison. Telling the it from the perspective of the Mirror was a take I didn't anticipate, but it works incredibly well. I was gripped from beginning-to-end and I loved your use of 'voice' here throughout.