Jennifer James
3 weeks ago
This story really got to me! The way you showed Su Li’s past and her drive for revenge was so powerful. Every part pulled me in, and I felt like I was right there with her. You're such a talented writer.
The “bitter winter” and “wailing cut through the sky” instantly set the mood. I was like, what’s going on. And when Su Li realized she was back at fourteen. I was shocked in the best way. That twist made her whole plan for revenge even more exciting. And when she said, Heaven has eyes. I felt that.
And Jun Mo, Prince Jing. He sounds amazing. The way you described him calm, warm, grac.