Hansel & Gretel

Blast off with Germanians Hansel and Gretel as they wander through caves, follow flying creatures and try not to get eaten alive. Students will enjoy this escape to the dark, vivid world of Crone and ponder what "Rot" needs to be dealt as their journey continues...next installment?

Very well done! I really enjoyed the writing style and instantly felt connected to the characters and was invested in their fate. I was impressed with your word choices and phrasing, and could tell the extreme amount of effort that went into creating every sentence. I want to read so many more chapters about this version of H&G! Please keep writing because I love your work!

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What a fun read! I loved the sci-fi twist to this classic tale. Very imaginative and I was completely immersed in your worldbuilding!

Such a compelling take on this classic story