An otherworldly visitor.
A shattered promise.
And an unpaid debt.
Alma didn’t know her days on Earth were numbered, but when a mysterious visitor from a distant galaxy reappears after a centuries-...
What an engaging story! I particularly enjoyed the relatability of the characters. I think it was this connection that made the ending feel so especially tragic. This is a story that will stay with you long after you’ve finished reading.
Kelsey Josephson
critic
3 years ago
I loved this original take on Pied Piper. Seeing the events unfold through Alma's eyes grounded the sci-fi elements into a believable setting. The growing sense of unease was paced perfectly, and the ending is a gut punch (in the best possible way.)
Chandra Snicker
critic
3 years ago
Thank you for your kind words, Kim Riot. I'm glad you enjoyed!
Kim Riot
critic
3 years ago
Wow! This story is incredible! The author painted a beautiful picture and the end left me reeling.