The Pied Piper of Stars

This is fantastic work and I’d be happy to share some ideas if you’re open to hearing them. Discord: elsa_lopez12 Email: elsalopez3935@gmail.com

Wow! Amazing story. Absolutely worth the read ❤️

What an engaging story! I particularly enjoyed the relatability of the characters. I think it was this connection that made the ending feel so especially tragic. This is a story that will stay with you long after you’ve finished reading.

I loved this original take on Pied Piper. Seeing the events unfold through Alma's eyes grounded the sci-fi elements into a believable setting. The growing sense of unease was paced perfectly, and the ending is a gut punch (in the best possible way.)

Thank you for your kind words, Kim Riot. I'm glad you enjoyed!