The story begins not with dramatic outbursts, but with subtle acts of control – isolating Sarah
from her friends, dictating her appearance, and chipping away at her self-esteem. Marcus is a
master of ...
Chapters
1Chapter 1:Traped in amber
2Chapter 2:The cracks begin to show
3Chapter 4:A friend's guiding hand.
4Chapter 3: Whispers of freedom
5Chapter 5:The breaking point
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Miriam Smithh
3 days ago
Hi Author,
I’m a casual reader and I really love reading stories. Today, while I was reading, I came across one of your stories and I absolutely loved it. The way you write truly sets you apart from others. I especially liked how beautifully you described each scene it felt so real and vivid I was just wondering, how long have you been doing this amazing work?
Ruby M. Ballamy
2 months ago
Hello Nancy,
I truly enjoyed reading your story it was engaging and left a lasting impression on me. I would be delighted to share a few thoughtful suggestions that could help strengthen the narrative even further, if you’re open to receiving feedback.
Would you be comfortable connecting through another platform for easier communication? If so, you can reach me directly at rubymballamy@gmail.com
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Looking forward to your response,
Ruby M. Ballamy
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karencrab
2 months ago
Hello, I read your story and I really liked it. If you don’t mind, I’d love to share some ideas that might make your story even better. Would it be possible for us to talk on another platform?
Email: karencrabtree697@gmail.com
Discord: karencrabtree.